Wednesday, July 14, 2010

You made me mad-Writer's Workshop #4

You made me Mad!-Writer's Workshop #4

I was trying to help
But clearly that isn't what you felt
Frustrated, irritated, annoyed
That I could do something so simple
so wrong
Who knew when making your lunch
You wouldn't want the pickles on top

I tried to help you out that night
After a long day filled with toil and strife.
Never again will fix your lunch
Now you can go eat out with
the rest of the bunch.



At July 15, 2010 at 1:32 AM , Blogger welcome to my world of poetry said...

Sometimes one can't do right for doing wrong. Loved the verse.

Have a good day.

At July 16, 2010 at 9:04 AM , Blogger Carol Kilgore said...

We've all been there. Who knew there were different ways to make PB&J?

At July 17, 2010 at 1:59 PM , Blogger R.M.Gilbert said...

Okay, so I laughed a little. I'm sorry. It was cute though. :)

Do you write more than blogs and poems? (Btw, in from LBS)

At July 17, 2010 at 2:56 PM , Blogger Dawn said...

Thanks for stopping by! Love this!

At July 17, 2010 at 6:48 PM , Blogger Dawn said...

Hi Carol ~

Just wanted to let you know you won the May Queen Musings guidebook! I've sent it to you using the e-mail listed here. If it's changed, or you don't receive it, let me know! (I'm leaving for the beach in the morning & will be computerless this week)

At July 17, 2010 at 9:04 PM , Blogger Michele Chastain said...

Oh my...been there! :)

At July 18, 2010 at 12:26 PM , Blogger Yenta Mary said...

Thanks so much for coming to visit, via the Tea Party! Now following you ... :)

I get the Pillsbury roti at Indian markets here in Ann Arbor. I'm not sure how easy they are to find in other cities. Seeing the giggling Doughboy on "authentic Indian cuisine" makes me laugh every time!


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